自由的灵魂被无形的枷锁层层围绕白纸上的剑气锐利的刺进我心里流淌的血早已凝固泪 也早已干枯席卷而来的是伏天盖地的无奈和悲哀何时胜利凯歌才能响起何时和平白鸽才能展翅何时如阳光般的希望能重新照耀我心田。。。
aiyer..so fierce de....you wrote this?
nice poem ...^^fierce? no lah....it describes our feelings as form 6 students!
Yup, why is it fierce?
ok la...agressive maybe! LOl well written anyway!
Thanks!!!
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aiyer..so fierce de....you wrote this?
nice poem ...^^
fierce? no lah....it describes our feelings as form 6 students!
Yup, why is it fierce?
ok la...agressive maybe! LOl well written anyway!
Thanks!!!
Post a Comment